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Steps to Fame ... Fade by `hyper-psycho:iconhyper-psycho:

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Nikon Coolpix 4500
Teenage Drama part two.

Models: Alex ( ~lie-eltae ) and I ( `hyper-psycho ).

(c) Zlatko Unger.

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~Allynna Sep 16, 2004, 3:09:02 PM
oooohh! yes its so great

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simply singing for the girl
that mkaes us try so very hard
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`bookdiva Sep 16, 2004, 3:18:04 PM
Nice capture of mood and light, noir balance and expressiveness...well done.

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*f0xychick3n Sep 16, 2004, 3:26:20 PM
very nice, this reminds me of a story i read on here..

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"Yes, darling William, no damage has been done, although I greatly fear I have shit in my diapers." - The Dark Half, Stephen King

i want your eyes, macro style
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=arumdamour Sep 16, 2004, 4:14:25 PM
:O_o: Very dark ambiance here...

Nice composition and good use of light too.
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~gondi Sep 16, 2004, 4:16:52 PM
i love murders... i ... i happen to commit them quite often, its quite fun...im in the mob, im also italian...so YA know!
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~lie-eltae Sep 16, 2004, 5:52:12 PM
haha "teenage drama part 2", haven't thought of it that way
the colors were awesome but it looks good in bw too, adds to the atmosphere=)
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~kaorukun Sep 16, 2004, 7:11:23 PM
Like the balance on this one, the title may have worked better if it was named "Teenage Murder/Suicide" or something. If the color scheme was similar to the Teenage Drama 1, then it was a better choice to convert it into black and white, adds more depth and story to the whole image. The slight tilt (or so it seems) adds more on the composition, as it confuses the viewer on the depth of field in some way.

I think this one's a lot better than the first one, or at least you tried more with it. Good work.

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I like to state the most obvious things just to bore you. If you did not know it, then more power for me to taunt you.
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~cybrghst Sep 17, 2004, 7:40:37 AM
Interesting concept here, and pulled off rather well. the dark atmosphere adds to the title, for the steps to fame can sometimes be dark and dismal. You can be pulled in many directions, and sometime put yourself out there when your morals are completely against it. The comp works well, the powerful light is just a little strong, maybe stop down in f/stop, to get a smaller glow. But it adds alot to the ambience. Nice shooting!
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~scubbs Sep 17, 2004, 5:47:59 PM
Great idea, the arrangement of the figures is pretty good, nice play of light and shodows going on. One thing I thought I'd point out though... I think the light from the lamp is way to bright, and it really distracts from the scene below :)

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~luanis Sep 18, 2004, 12:54:34 PM
If this were true I would hunt her down and shoot her!

looks great, your recent works rock hun!

:heart: love you.

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I'm better than I was before but not as good as I'm gonna get.
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