Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

 
©2005-2009 `hyper-psycho
:iconhyper-psycho:

Artist's Comments

1920s Chicago with all that jazz.
Model: Liz
Canon 20D + 50mm 1.4 + PSPX (bw)

Critiques


Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconbookdiva:
Fantastic expressiveness, good creativity, love the light, the flares...leading our imagination, nice tones and contrasts, beautiful work. :hug:

--
:heart: My Sissie-poo `bren
:nod::heart: °jark The Beat Goes On °matteo :nod::heart:
Be civil..no verbal abuse, no spam.
:iconhyper-psycho:
Thanks on the kind words ...
does it give a feeling as she was in a downtown part of a big city ?

--
[ Gallery | dotCom | MySpace | Flickr ]
:iconkaorukun:
I don't get the reference on the title itself.

Your love affair with the 50mm shines through with the background bokeh, one of the common qualities in your portraits, and seems like you have a good grip on it. The dots of light above her is what I like best about this picture, as it works like a halo, illuminating the model.

The focus on her shirt distracts me though, especially since the model is slightly out of focus. I can't help myself keep noticing that. The model being in focus would've made this photo much better in my opinion.

The model is very cute, can't believe she's in college. She doesn't even look like she belongs in high school! Her sheepish grin is very alluring as well.

Otherwise, it's a great portrait, but I'm not hundred percent satisfied with the composition. Seems like it's right in the middle, rather than focusing on the model or giving more space to the background to make her standout.

--
Art for art's sake. - James Abbott McNeill Whistler
:iconsoakingspleen:
cool pic dude ;)

--
:star: To catch me, you gotta be fast. To find me, you gotta be smart. But to be mine.. damn, you gotta be kiddin':star:
member of =mexicanos
:iconsmoochi86:
Very nice picture. :nod:
She has the cutest smile!

--
:jarkinajar:
I know everything will be alright but for tonight let's pretend it won't
ART|STOCK|LIVEJOURNAL
:iconrothaksa:
so that is what i should expect fromn a good photographer witha cannon 20D..... i guess this camera is awesome afterall. forget teh nikon man cannon it is.

--
Heyyy,

be kind and check out my gallery if you would. :-)
[link]
:iconrothaksa:
wow i must admit that is a very in-depth and detailed and useful analysis. lol my self esteem is low enough. make sure you dont kill me if you decide to look at my gallery.

--
Heyyy,

be kind and check out my gallery if you would. :-)
[link]
:iconhyper-psycho:
You gotta know the times ... the slang ... all that jazz

actually ... just google the title ... im sure you can find the meaning of it
the nature of this shots and the implications i made are just amazing by my standards ... though you will have to look into many aspects of the idea, the model, and the setting

i had a sharper image
but i went with this one
because it gives that fun soft feeling that i wanted

but fear not, i understand your focus concern

hehe , liz is awesome ... im looking foward to doing another shooot with her as soon as the leaves get more fun around here

thanks for the critique

--
[ Gallery | dotCom | MySpace | Flickr ]
:iconhyper-psycho:
hehe

liz is great


thanks on the comment

--
[ Gallery | dotCom | MySpace | Flickr ]

Details

October 17, 2005
88.8 KB
600×900

Statistics

78
36 [who?]
926 (0 today)

Site Map